Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
These days, more and more
people
that are suffering from some health conditions, look for alternative
ways of treatments instead
of going to the
specialists. In my opinion, Correct article usage
apply
such
an approach can have many negative effects.
Firstly
, by choosing something new or medically unchecked, you are putting at risk your health. You never know if a way that you heard from someone or found online is legit and harmless. When choosing a certificate
doctor you have Change the verb form
certificated
assurance
that they know what they are doing and Add an article
the assurance
an assurance
also
, they are obligated to swear that they will do everything to help their patients, when they are becoming medics. For instance
, there have been some cases, where people
trying alternative
treatments, actually made their condition worse instead
of helping themselves.
Secondly
, with a drastic increase in popularity
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the popularity
in
anything, there always appear Change preposition
of
people
who only want to make profit
and do not care about Add an article
a profit
others
well-being. Digging more into that topic, many law-breakers would sell fake products or tell wrong methods just to have any kind of profit for themselves. Change noun form
others'
other's
Additionally
, supporters of alternative
ways of treatments
are often older Fix the agreement mistake
treatment
people
, who are more vulnerable to get
tricked and cheated on by those unmoral ones. Wrong verb form
getting
For example
, they could start making phone calls to them and asking for money in exchange for some amazing product that in reality does not work.
In conclusion, alternative
methods as they may seem so brilliant are rarely better than conventional ones, but also
they carry a lot more risk in themselves.Submitted by bandrowskaagnieszka1 on
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