Many people these days have a computer, laptop, telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Especially, during and after COVID more
people
start working from
home
. The companies provide their employees with the devices that they need
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from
home
. That prevented the companies not needed to close their doors and did stay open, and
therefore
, makes working from
home
more common, nowadays. On the one ,hand,working from
home
can be less distracting. For, example sitting by yourself in
a
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office at
home
without anyone interrupting can make
people
more productive.
Also
,as an illustration, online meetings become more effective. Before and after the meetings the
people
do not stay and have pleasant confessions with each other. Not only they are more productive but
also
have no travel time to
work
.
This
gives the employees more free time and spends on it with their family, friends and hobbies.
As a result
a more happy worker. On the other ,hand working from
home
gives the person less connection with the firm.
As a result
without any binding with the
,
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company
people
are willing easier change jobs because they have no feeling for it. As a ,result a big overflow of
people
coming and going and that can change the culture inside the company in harm's way.
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not all jobs are made to
work
from
home
. For ,example as a
,
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the
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manager you need to show your face sometimes to stay connected with the
people
whom you coach. Behind
the
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,
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the computer you do not have any feelings about how someone is doing. In conclusion, working from
home
can benefit the employer and employees. Clearly, they can finish more
work
and
also
have more quality time at
home
. Only, it is
also
important to stay linked with the company.
Therefore
, I believe the employee can
work
from
home
and only needs to go to their firm to stay bound.
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