Many people these days have a computer, laptop, telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

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Especially, during and after COVID more

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start working from

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. The companies provide their employees with the devices that they need

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work

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from

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. That prevented the companies not needed to close their doors and did stay open, and

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, makes working from

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more common, nowadays. On the one ,hand,working from

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can be less distracting. For, example sitting by yourself in

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office at

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without anyone interrupting can make

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more productive.

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,as an illustration, online meetings become more effective. Before and after the meetings the

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do not stay and have pleasant confessions with each other. Not only they are more productive but

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have no travel time to

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gives the employees more free time and spends on it with their family, friends and hobbies.

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a more happy worker. On the other ,hand working from

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gives the person less connection with the firm.

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without any binding with the

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company

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are willing easier change jobs because they have no feeling for it. As a ,result a big overflow of

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coming and going and that can change the culture inside the company in harm's way.

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not all jobs are made to

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from

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. For ,example as a

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the

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manager you need to show your face sometimes to stay connected with the

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whom you coach. Behind

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the computer you do not have any feelings about how someone is doing. In conclusion, working from

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can benefit the employer and employees. Clearly, they can finish more

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and

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have more quality time at

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. Only, it is

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important to stay linked with the company.

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, I believe the employee can

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from

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and only needs to go to their firm to stay bound.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Many people these days have a computer, laptop, telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Your opinion

The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for . Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation ?

Human diet has changed throughout history. How has it changed? In your opinion, has the change been good or bad?

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in the hospital, telling him about the match