Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The whole world is suffering from some
problems
that are related to
environment
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however
, it is argued by
some
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that these issues could be solved by global efforts, whereas others convict that environmental
problems
could be solved domestically. I agree that both international and national efforts can solve these
problems
and
this
essay will discuss my view. To commence with, there are a lot of international organizations who work together to save the
environment
of
whole
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world. Because of that, I agree they are taking a lot of necessary steps to conserve
nature
.
For instance
, GEF (global
environment
facilities)
a
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global organization which publishes various articles and advertisements for keeping
nature
untouched
and
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these kinds of steps are increasing
the
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awareness among
people
and I believe
this
is an effective way to spread the causes of how environments are
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effected and how to keep them safe.
On the other hand
, local governments are now a bit concerned about the
problems
that
are constitute
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from
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nature
. I agree governments are now seen encouraging
people
to plant more trees and
also
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some seminars based on the
environment
.
For example
, a popular organization named “Saved the
nature
” spread awareness among
people
through several kinds of seminars where they told
people
the drawbacks and increase of global
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warming related
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causes and solutions
as well as
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they
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donate free plants to
peoples
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.
Furthermore
, advertising about
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global environmental issues is an incredible way to spread consciousness. To conclude, for solving these kinds of environmentally related drawbacks, I agree both international and domestic steps are important because both have their individual strategies to save
nature
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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