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appiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

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Happiness
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 is very difficult to define
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 because it means so many different things to liferent
people
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. While some
people
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 link
happiness
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 to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal
relationships
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. Yet others think that
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spiritual
spirtual
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spiritual
 paths, rather than either the material world or
relationships
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 with
people
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, are the only way to true
happiness
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. Because
people
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themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition
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 true for everyone.
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, if there are different kinds of
happiness
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 for different individuals
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 the
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 step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know
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 he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy. Of course, factors
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 as loving
relationships
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, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our
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 too. But
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 does not mean that
people
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 without these conditions cannot be happy. Overall, I think
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 ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving
happiness
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. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our
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, making other
people
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 happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.). like sell-awareness,
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 very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving
happiness
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