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you should spend 20 minues on this task. write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly casuing dangerous.

#minues #situation #adolescents #dogs
I am writing to let you know
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recent development happening every night at my
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neighbourhood
. sir
their
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 have been some
adolescent
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 that let their dogs run wildly on the street and is
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causing
casuing
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causing
 dangerous problem in your organisation. so
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 am
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writing
wrinting
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writing
 to let you know
that is
serious
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 disturbance and distracting our peace of mind and
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causing
casuing
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causing
to
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 much noise and now they drop trash on the street ,I think you can put a stop to
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 by letting them stay in
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 personal houses and take good care of
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their dogs.of possible they should get
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cage
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 for dogs and for them inside.
secondly
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i
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 think you should get us
securities
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 to take care of the
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environment
evironment
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environment
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this
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destroying
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destroying
 things.thank
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 advance
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 will
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appreciate
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appreciate
if
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 my request is been granted.
Your
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 faithfully Okafor
damain
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domain
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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