Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In present days, the distribution of budgets either in
art
projects
or public facilities is becoming a hot issue in modern society. I believe that governments should allocate more budgets on
improving fundamental infrastructures.
Advocates who support arts places Change preposition
to
such
as galleries, museums, and theaters
should be supported, believe that arts are vital in people’s lives, which enriched our mental spirit and aesthetic abilities. If there were more Change the spelling
theatres
art
places in a country, it would be more likely to conceive more artists and creators and increase the awareness of this
country in the art
sphere. There are, however
, some drawbacks if too much attention is paid to this
aspect. The government should be more aware of the fundamental construction rather than unnecessary projects
.
There are some significant factors that public infrastructures should be listed on primary
agenda. Correct article usage
the primary
Firstly
, aspects such
as the medical system, education, transportation, and others are essential for development. In other words
, it is problematic to create artwork without a harmonious and safe circumstances
. Correct the article-noun agreement
harmonious and safe circumstances
a harmonious and safe circumstance
For instance
, art
and creation are the last
agenda that the government would take into consideration for countries that suffered from wars and diseases all year. Moreover
, public projects
save more costs and time than art
museums. It is common to spend more money and human power on art
places due to more budgets of security requirements are
requested.
In conclusion, we can see that funds should be distributed more on public Wrong verb form
being
projects
, and I believe that the benefits of this
outweigh arts projects
.Submitted by tessiet412 on
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