Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A group of
people
opine that economic development
is important
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an important
target
of Add the particle
to target
government
, while some think that discrete Add an article
the government
of
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apply
development
are
equivocal important for a Correct subject-verb agreement
is
country
. I personally support the latter proposition and will present relevant points along with precise examples and backup
my view.
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first
of all, economic development
is key of
success, because without financial Change preposition
to
development
any country
do
not reach Change the verb form
does
there
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their
do
not concentrate Correct subject-verb agreement
does
other
sectors, Change preposition
on other
moreover
financial development
country
invest
money Change the verb form
invests
there
weak sectors. For Replace the word
their
examples
, Fix the agreement mistake
example
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economical
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an economical
development
country
, so that, they invest their money in which sector they are weak. like cultivation, sports etc.
secondly
, financial
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financially
development
country
always
independent. They can make their decision freely, which Add a missing verb
is always
help
to concentrate Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
for
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on
development
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the development
every
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of every
branches
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branch
in
their land. Change preposition
of
For instance
, African
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in African
countries
, Sudan is economicallyCorrect your spelling
undeveloped
undevelopment
, Correct your spelling
undeveloped
as a result
, they depend
helper Add the preposition
ondepend
country
. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Hence
, they do not take any decision to develop their country
.
However
,together with economical development
morality is important factors
to develop any Fix the agreement mistake
factor
country
. when people
do not maintain or follow honesty, truthfulness and trust, they do not keep their economic development
stable position. For example
, when people
do not trust you, they never deal with you any
agreement or without help or Change preposition
in any
trust
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,trust
people
will not work together. As a result
, progress is difficult of
any Change preposition
for
countries
.
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country
Secondly
, education is the
important Correct article usage
an
factors
to upgrade any Fix the agreement mistake
factor
countries
. Education Fix the agreement mistake
country
help
to open eyes, which Change the form of the verb
helps
contribute
to Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
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the reached
reached
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reaching
sustainable
position Correct article usage
the sustainable
of
any Change preposition
in
countries
. Fix the agreement mistake
country
For example
, Japanese
are 100% educated, so Correct article usage
the Japanese
that
they realize right or wrong, Correct word choice
apply
as
it result, they are well developed.
In conclusion, it is obvious that every Correct word choice
and as
sectors
are needed to make Change to a singular noun
sector
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a development
development
Replace the word
developing
country
. So I think that today's
contest other types of progress are gained.Change preposition
in today's
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