Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is loss of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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People
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have faced plenty of
problems
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since the beginning of time. One of the major
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problem
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is environmental issues. There is much debate over whether the fundamental environmental matter of our time is the destruction of
plants
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and
animals
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or
problems
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which are more vital.
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animals
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and
plants
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consist
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an important part of the
ecosystem
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, ı strongly believe that the
pollution
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which
people
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produce is a more significant
problem
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for our world. Some
people
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say that the most significant cause of
environmental
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the environmental
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problem
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problems
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is
extinction
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the extinction
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of
animals
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and
plants
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since there is
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ecosystem
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which is relevant
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nice order in the world. Indeed,
plants
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and
animals
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consist of
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crucial
crutial
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crucial
part of the
ecosystem
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. If any part of
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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break
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down, It could create some environmental disorders.
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, many experts concerning
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issue suggest that there are bigger
problems
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instead
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of
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inhibition
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the inhibiton
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inhibiton
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inhibition
of
plants
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and
animals
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because these
problems
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have more
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disadvantageous
disadvantages
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disadvantageous
impacts on the environment.
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, scientists find types of
pollution
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more dangerous for
environment
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the environment
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than the other things.
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, air
pollution
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cause
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causes
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respiratory
problems
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in humans and
animals
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.
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of
this
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, life
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expectancy
expentancy
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expectancy
of
live
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is getting decrease.
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, water
pollution
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give
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rise to
poisoning
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the poisoning
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on
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of
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the
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live things
such
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as
animals
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,
plants
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, insects and human.
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,
pollution
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influences
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all aspect of life. I
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completely
competely
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completely
agree with the statement ,because, to illustrate
people
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who live in China put masks on their faces because of the air
pollution
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. So it has an obvious effect on every life.
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pollution
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is the biggest cause of other
problems
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, including the loss of
plants
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and
animals
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. In conclusion, Some
people
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say that the extinction of
animals
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and
plants
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is the most fundamental and others say there are more major
problems
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compared to
this
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. I entirely believe that
pollution
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is the biggest
problem
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in terms of environmental
problems
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because it affects all living things.
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