Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is loss of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

People

have faced plenty of

problems

since the beginning of time. One of the major

problem

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is environmental issues. There is much debate over whether the fundamental environmental matter of our time is the destruction of

plants

and

animals

or

problems

which are more vital.

Although

animals

and

plants

consist

of

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an important part of the

ecosystem

, ı strongly believe that the

pollution

which

people

produce is a more significant

problem

for our world. Some

people

say that the most significant cause of

environmental

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the environmental

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problem

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problems

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is

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

and

plants

since there is

a

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ecosystem

which is relevant

being

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nice order in the world. Indeed,

plants

and

animals

consist of

the

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crucial

crutial

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crucial

part of the

ecosystem

. If any part of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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break

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down, It could create some environmental disorders.

However

, many experts concerning

this

issue suggest that there are bigger

problems

instead

of

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inhibition

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inhibiton

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inhibition

of

plants

and

animals

because these

problems

have more

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disadvantageous

disadvantages

disadvantagous

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disadvantageous

impacts on the environment.

On the other hand

, scientists find types of

pollution

more dangerous for

environment

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the environment

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than the other things.

For example

, air

pollution

cause

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causes

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respiratory

problems

in humans and

animals

.

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of

this

, life

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expectancy

expentancy

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expectancy

of

live

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is getting decrease.

In addition

, water

pollution

give

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rise to

poisoning

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the poisoning

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on

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of

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the

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apply

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live things

such

as

animals

,

plants

, insects and human.

Therefore

,

pollution

influences

the

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all aspect of life. I

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completely

competely

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completely

agree with the statement ,because, to illustrate

people

who live in China put masks on their faces because of the air

pollution

. So it has an obvious effect on every life.

Thus

pollution

is the biggest cause of other

problems

, including the loss of

plants

and

animals

. In conclusion, Some

people

say that the extinction of

animals

and

plants

is the most fundamental and others say there are more major

problems

compared to

this

. I entirely believe that

pollution

is the biggest

problem

in terms of environmental

problems

because it affects all living things.