Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

No one can deny that in
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modern world international colleges now offer their subjects on the internet based and people can study at home on online, I feel it is a positive development, Online studies are comfortable for all
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because they
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going outside at the home and it has numerous benefits as well I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
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with the positive side, nowadays technology is advancing day by day and universities are
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encouraged
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to their students to take online courses because it is cheap and comfortable and their tutors organised classes anytime.
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students attend lectures online they learn easily everything because their teacher will show base techniques to
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their ability and institutions are
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their hires to take only online-based
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.
For example
, In Germany, The local governments declare that all schools and universities are now severed their lecture
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online because some bad
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today and offline group lessons will involve
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germs for all people.
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this
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and
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they like to provide their course on the internet based and their community
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like to study online because they can find all information without
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other
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help. To explain, Internal lessons are popular over the globe due to they are reliable and inexpensive and
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good consequence for their national transport recession
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they society will use
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opportunity and
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appreciate them.
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told around the world all new youths are studying at home because they believe it has
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for
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public and they increase their subject offers and many children will take them and
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. In conclusion,
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think it is a good impact on
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development and new generations are
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every essential skill each day with
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of
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university
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and authorities and it
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for the future years.
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  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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