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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

#children #tests #exams #school #age #five #six #right #eighteen #childern
Nowadays, both children and
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young adults
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exams
of
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 every subject at school, some school provides tests and
exams
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children
childrens
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 since they just have five or six year old and right up
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18 year old. To be honest, I think there are advantages more than disadvantages if the
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 not make
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most students heavy study.
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teacher
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teachers
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 want to test about
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 of their
pupils
; how they can absorb these contents or lessons.
Then
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the teacher
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teacher
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 should standardize every exam
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evaluate
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knowlagdes
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knowledge
 that
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 have got it.
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, the
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 would be the
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 for some
pupils
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also
 influent with someone to force them to be more
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 on the topics of
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.
Nonetheless
, these heavy tests would be feeling pressure and
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 for some
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. In
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, there were some
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pessimistic
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 who felt
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disappoint
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themself because they just had
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worst
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 score. They compared their score with other people and that could bring a bad feeling to them, unfortunately.
Therefore
, more tests and
exams
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mostly
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student
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students
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 if
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 are appropriate or not too difficult for
pupils
. Because these
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 can be useful for test or estimate
knowladges
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knowledge
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 of students in every school.
On the other hand
, if the education system provides
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 too much and so tricky; that can bring some unfortunate
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 and sadness for many students.
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