The self-driving cars is getting popular in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that the majority of transportation which
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becoming commonly accessible all over the world . Personally, I tend to consider that
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however
according to some , we should not ignore the fact that
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more benefits for humans.
First
and foremost, it is well-known that the
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of self-control cars is the best method to save more leisure time.
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individuals
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prefer to use them to reach faster and protect the
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time.
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, in Korea many self-drive
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instead
of typical transportation
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this
reason , it opens the door to
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more opportunities.
On the other hand
, it can be argued that
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cars
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some negative impact on
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health.
This
is oblivious that if the cars
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suddenly, the passage would hurt significantly
however
, sometimes they would die.
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ago a new car was on the way to
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in Tokyo and there was only one
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he had broken his leg. In conclusion, having
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everything mentioned into account in our final analysis, we can say that
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transports
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becoming commonly accessible which
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has more benefits for inhabitants.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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