Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Paternity

is of paramount

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as maternity. there is an idea that women are solely responsible for making a decision about having a

child

or not,

for

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this

reason

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she is responsible for

upbringing

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her

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child

. I am completely disagreeing with

this

idea. I believe that

both

fathers

and

mothers

are responsible for involving in

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decision making

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process of having a

child

or not. Because

both

of them will have their own duties in the breeding process.

Additionally

, parents should precisely consider the challenges which they may cope with after

birth

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of their children,

such

as caring, financial and educational challenges.

for example

, if a couple cannot manage their budget and

fulfill

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the basic amenities of their future

child

, they should

both

think and decide about it together. They should think about the peripheral aspects of their decision cooperatively.

In addition

, parents should share their tasks after bringing a

child

, because

both

are responsible for all peripheral issues of the

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new born

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child

from birth to his or her adulthood.

Also

, governments should help in

this

case. Because, in some countries, just

mothers

have maternity leave for the period of pregnancy and a year after, and there is no

paternity

leave.

Therefore

,

mostly

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mothers

are

solely

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responsible for

the

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child

than

fathers

.

This

time is difficult and

overburden

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for

mothers

, as they should do all the

task

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lonely. In order to help

mothers

,

fathers

should do their tasks and it is better to have

paternity

leave as well for caring

the

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newborn baby.

Also

,

for

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nurturing the

child

both

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impact on their children, so, they should consider

this

influence and try to cooperate with each other in bringing their children up. In conclusion, I believe that fatherhood and motherhood should

be consider

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equally important.

Both

fathers

and

mothers

are responsible

from

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deciding to have

child

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to upbringing and nurturing their

child

to adulthood. Governments

also

should help in

this

case by giving

paternity

leave to

fathers

.