Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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altered the way
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race has been living along with postponing the time limit we are supposed to be here for. The advances have been
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and saving. I shall discuss some of the major human
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aspects that have been altered by
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. The advancement in
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and
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for most
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the
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part has been
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to our existence.
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the innovations and discoveries in
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field
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been one of the biggest achievements of
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the
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life
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has been made easier for us with multiple inventions. The most recent example of
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helping the human race to survive has been the discovery of the Covid-19 vaccine. The vaccine has been the sole reason
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why we have been able to return to our normal
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without being in lockdown forever. The vaccine
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has saved a number of
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by preventing people from being infected by the
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life threatening
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virus.
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science
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has made our
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easier. With the invention of smartphones and laptops along with internet access. We could still work from home during a global pandemic like Covid-19. People did not
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their jobs over
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and still were able to attend work and keep themselves
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. Another major advancement in
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and
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is the existence of
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. It could be safe to say that a majority of the world would collapse if
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stopped working even for just one
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it could be safe to say that our
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these days revolve around
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and
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, as well as
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sure has completely changed the way of human
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over the
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century and
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has postponed the
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of our death with its advancements.
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there sure is no better time to be
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live
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than right now.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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  • mental health impacts
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  • environmental degradation
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