Historic
buildings
are part of a country's heritage. So, some people think that old
buildings
should be preserved rather than
buildings
. Old
buildings
hasChange the verb form
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been converted
inChange preposition
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museum or heritage places that
they Correct pronoun usage
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give
revenue
to the
government
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tourists. While
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buildings
can not get any
typesFix the agreement mistake
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of
revenue
. There are many advantages of preserving old
buildings
.
Therefore
, my inclination is elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
On the one hand , most
of Change preposition
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heritageAdd an article
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structureFix the agreement mistake
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have their own unique importance. The old
buildings
showsChange the verb form
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nationCorrect article usage
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and region's culture. They have aesthetic value and
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us a glimpse of our
gloriesReplace the word
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past.
Moreover
, these places are
also
tourist attractions and generate international exchange which has
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increased
revenue
ofChange preposition
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governmentCorrect article usage
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that
revenue
helps to maintain
historicalAdd an article
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placeFix the agreement mistake
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to be repaired and
renovate Change the form of the verb
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.
For example
, the Taj Mahal in my country
enough
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byChange preposition
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local international tourists.
Therefore
, it has
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repaired and
renovateChange the form of the verb
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.
Furthermore
, these types of old
buildings
can convert
toChange preposition
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functional units.
For instance
, in
many historical
buildings
convert
toChange preposition
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5-star hotels and resorts; while, in
such
buildingFix the agreement mistake
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make
government
offices, libraries,
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and museums
to Change preposition
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automatically maintain.
On the other hand
, the population has grown in recent years. so, the number of available places to stay has decreased.
Therefore
, the
government
demolishes the old
buildings
and built new high-rise
buildings
.
In addition
, many people live in these old
buildings
and seriously risk their lives. In order to minimize the risk,
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owners start construction work to renovate these
buildings
.
In conclusion, the old
buildings
are covered
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the Correct article usage
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historical place
such
as museums , libraries and other tourist attraction place that
they Correct pronoun usage
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showsChange the verb form
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ancient history.
This
information
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useChange the form of the verb
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toChange preposition
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purposeAdd an article
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educationalReplace the word
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. so, I personally find that the benefits of preserving old
buildings
outweighed
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its drawbacks.