Some people believe that certain old buildings should be preserved more than others. What types of old buildings should be preserved? Do you think the advantages of preserving old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

Historic

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are part of a country's heritage. So, some people think that old

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should be preserved rather than

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modern

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modern

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. Old

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has

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museum or heritage places that

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give

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to the

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tourists. While

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modern

morden

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modern

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can not get any

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of

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. There are many advantages of preserving old

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.

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, my inclination is elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand , most

of

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heritage

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the heritage

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structure

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structures

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have their own unique importance. The old

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shows

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the nation

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and region's culture. They have aesthetic value and

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us a glimpse of our

glories

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past.

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, these places are

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tourist attractions and generate international exchange which has

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increased

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of

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that

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helps to maintain

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a historical

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place

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to be repaired and

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.

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generate

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generates

enough

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by

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local international tourists.

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, it has

significantly

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repaired and

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, these types of old

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can convert

to

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functional units.

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, in

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many historical

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convert

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5-star hotels and resorts; while, in

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such

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building

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make

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offices, libraries,

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and museums

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automatically maintain.

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, the population has grown in recent years. so, the number of available places to stay has decreased.

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, the

government

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demolishes the old

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and built new high-rise

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.

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, many people live in these old

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and seriously risk their lives. In order to minimize the risk,

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owners start construction work to renovate these

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. In conclusion, the old

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are covered

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the

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historical place

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as museums , libraries and other tourist attraction place that

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shows

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ancient history.

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information

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use

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to

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purpose

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of

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educational

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. so, I personally find that the benefits of preserving old

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outweighed

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its drawbacks.