Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes do you agree or disagree?

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split opinions about
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wether
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the attires could provide un information about the
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person'
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nationality and his/her character.I completely disagree with
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statement and in the following
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will
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just
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my
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discordance
.
Firstly
, the outfit of a
person
depends totally
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his/her taste and way of perceiving life.
For
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a
person
can choose the
dress
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extravagantly
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although
they come from
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Muslim
country
.
Therefore
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knowledge about a
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a
person
should personally visit it, live and make
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acquaintance
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acquaintances
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inhabitants.
Moreover
, a
country
's culture could not be
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descended
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only by a
person
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as a result
, curious people should participate in festivals and
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ceremonies
ceromonies
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ceremonies
to gain more
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mysterious
information about the traditions.
In addition
, owing to the global culture and consumerism
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that we live
,
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modern
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society,people imitate the
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code of their idols,
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,which are considered more
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with the new trend.
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, youngsters do not buy attires that are produced in their
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prefer
prefere
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prefer
buying them online or even going shopping in a foreign
country
. In conclusion,
although
it is believed that we have to pass down our traditions and
customes
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customs
customers
, including the way to
dress
,
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still believe that not the way we
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional garments
  • Cultural background
  • Personal identity
  • Character traits
  • Social status
  • Profession
  • Subcultures
  • Conformity
  • External factors
  • Globalization
  • Fashion trends
  • Cultural identity
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