You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Give details about the concert. How you won the tickets. Why you decided to give it to your friend.

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Dear Tina Hope

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letter finds you radiant health and a beat of spirits. I am writing

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letter to invite you to a musical

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at the global village

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Monday and the programme starts at 8:00pm. I purchased two tickets for us. Do you remember how much fun we had

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year at the global village?

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year I got two seats for the music

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. I am damn sure that you will be surprised if you know about the grand

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. Our great musician, the legend A R Rahman is coming for the inauguration ceremony. As I know your passion for music and you are a big fan of fame, I thought

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will be a great astonishment for you. My colleague's wife is a part of the

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management of

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show and via ,her I received the tickets. Hope you will be joining me. Regarding the travelling details, let’s discuss them later. See you soon. Yours lovingly, Soumya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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163 words

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