Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What is the benefit of travelling for the traveler?

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Curiosity
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has been human nature for many centuries. Be it Christopher Columbus or Neal Armstrong
curiosity
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has taken
people
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to new places. The same
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still forces
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to
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. Due to recent development in technology and
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of new means of
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travel
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has become very easy.
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after retirement save their money to see the world. Teenagers take time backpacking to new places and gathering new experiences. Since the advent of cars or trains travelling within countries became easier.
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, many religious
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used to dream of visiting Vatican City. Now travelling to
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Vatican City is very easy. In ancient times Silk Route from China to Europe was connected to carry
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silk and spices to the other side of the world.
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for centuries only had a hint of the taste of foreign cuisine. Now they
travel
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to explore various cuisines. Due to global opportunities
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people
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travel
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for work. A few countries
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China and India are blessed with more population while countries
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as Australia and Europe have ageing
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populations
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unable to carry their economy ahead. Many
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travel
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for better life and opportunities
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the developed world. As English is a global language, has become a whole lot easier now.
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travelers
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learn a great deal from their new experiences.
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has become less expensive and faster.
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is the number one reason. Another reason is that now more and more
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have a disposable income. They can
travel
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. Social media shows
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the places visited by their friends and family and
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instills
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their
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.
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are
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traveling
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for work, education and business. To
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, new means of transport have made
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easy. Those with curious and adventurous
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enjoy
traveling
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.
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enriches
people
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’s lives with varied experiences.
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