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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What is the benefit of travelling for the traveler?

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Curiosity
 has been human nature for many centuries. Be it Christopher Columbus or Neal Armstrong
curiosity
 has taken
people
 to new places. The same
curiosity
 still forces
people
 to
travel
. Due to recent development in technology and
advent
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 of new means of
travel
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this
 has become very easy.
People
 after retirement save their money to see the world. Teenagers take time backpacking to new places and gathering new experiences. Since the advent of cars or trains travelling within countries became easier.
For example
, many religious
people
 used to dream of visiting Vatican City. Now travelling to
the
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Vatican City is very easy. In ancient times Silk Route from China to Europe was connected to carry
the
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silk and spices to the other side of the world.
People
 for centuries only had a hint of the taste of foreign cuisine. Now they
travel
 to explore various cuisines. Due to global opportunities
available
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people
travel
 for work. A few countries
such
a
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as
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 China and India are blessed with more population while countries
such
 as Australia and Europe have ageing
population
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populations
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 unable to carry their economy ahead. Many
people
travel
 for better life and opportunities
to
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 the developed world. As English is a global language, has become a whole lot easier now.
The
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Travelers
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travelers
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travellers
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 learn a great deal from their new experiences.
Traveling
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Travelling
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 has become less expensive and faster.
This
 is the number one reason. Another reason is that now more and more
people
 have a disposable income. They can
travel
. Social media shows
people
 the places visited by their friends and family and
thus
instills
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 their
curiosity
.
People
 are
also
traveling
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travelling
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 for work, education and business. To
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sum-up
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, new means of transport have made
traveling
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travelling
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 easy. Those with curious and adventurous
mind
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minds
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 enjoy
traveling
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.
Traveling
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 enriches
people
’s lives with varied experiences.
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