Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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whether governments should allocate funds

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arts

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or public infrastructures. Admittedly, aesthetic development plays a vital role in our modern society.

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, I believe that more budgets should be allocated to fundamental construction. The drawbacks of

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encourage

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more allocations to

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developments outweigh the advantages. Expenditures on

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like music, gallery, and theatre are unnecessary budget projects for governments, which spend massive time and human power on them.

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, it took years and thousands of workers to build an art museum.

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, if there were equal time and energy allocated to public facilities, much more costs could be saved. There are,

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, certain significances for governments to pay more attention

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fundamental aspects like

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medical system, education, transport system, and environment.

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, it is problematic to conduct art creation without a normal and

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life environment in a society. Imagine a country which suffered from crime and disease all year, the development of

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is the

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agenda that the

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should take into consideration.

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, most of the

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budgets are composed of local taxes, the main purpose of

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is to live under

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healthy and

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conditions. In

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case, the

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should not waste its

budgets

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on other unnecessary aspects.

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, more credibility could be increased for the

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if they focus more on the public. In conclusion, it is vital for

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spends primary funds on public facilities improvements rather than

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emergent. How to cater to dwellers’ basic living requirements has

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priority beyond

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development.