Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For the past few decades, it has been argued

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whether governments should allocate funds

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arts

or public infrastructures. Admittedly, aesthetic development plays a vital role in our modern society.

However

, I believe that more budgets should be allocated to fundamental construction. The drawbacks of

government

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encourage

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more allocations to

arts

developments outweigh the advantages. Expenditures on

arts

like music, gallery, and theatre are unnecessary budget projects for governments, which spend massive time and human power on them.

For instance

, it took years and thousands of workers to build an art museum.

Hence

, if there were equal time and energy allocated to public facilities, much more costs could be saved. There are,

however

, certain significances for governments to pay more attention

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fundamental aspects like

public

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medical system, education, transport system, and environment.

Firstly

, it is problematic to conduct art creation without a normal and

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life environment in a society. Imagine a country which suffered from crime and disease all year, the development of

arts

is the

last

agenda that the

government

should take into consideration.

Secondly

, most of the

government

budgets are composed of local taxes, the main purpose of

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is to live under

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healthy and

harmony

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conditions. In

this

case, the

government

should not waste its

budgets

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on other unnecessary aspects.

Finally

, more credibility could be increased for the

government

if they focus more on the public. In conclusion, it is vital for

government

spends primary funds on public facilities improvements rather than

arts

emergent. How to cater to dwellers’ basic living requirements has

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priority beyond

arts

development.