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The presented comparison diagram gives an idea of the
level
of illiteracy in various regions of the globe in the context of genders for a certain period of twenty-two years ago. It is worth noting, that the obvious trends in persistent illiteracy on the African continent and in South Asian
countries
are striking. But there are
also
similarities in the proportions inherent in different genders.
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illustration gives an understanding that developed
countries
contain the maximum
level
of educated people. It is interesting to emphasize that literacy among men is always comparatively higher than among women in all regions without exception. One cannot fail to notice the astonishing
level
of lack of basic reading and writing skills among people in Sub-Saharan Africa, the Arab States and South Asia. At the same time, the
last
two of those mentioned show that more than half of the women and around 30%
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are
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the named category. It is
also
clear, that at least 10
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of men and women do not have the proper
level
of knowledge in Latin American
countries
. It is noticeable against the background of developed
countries
, that the female
level
of education is much lower than the male
level
in Arab and Eastern
countries
.
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