Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while believe that television is better for this purpose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays our
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is very modern and creating are new technologies day by day.Because
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old
people
believe that radio is
great
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thing to
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answering
awarding
news
but young
people
guess that
Technics
is well for
this
prospect.
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justify
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following
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sentences. Many
people
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are interesting
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get a lot of
news
and try to read or watch
this
news
.Some old
people
have themselves radio and conscious
news
over
this
.
People
are when get some
novetly
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novelty
they feel themselves very
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smooth
and
this
bring
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to a lot of benefits.
People
should always be aware of the
news
,and
this
is very important for their
life
because if they are unconscious of the novelty happening in the world,
we
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can be left behind
the
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times.
For example
, scientists have found out that some
people
in China are not aware of the
news
and because of
this
,they did not know that there will be a fire in their place. Our
life
is have been to contemporary and will
compose
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year by year and one of them is
computer
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, telephone and television.We
are
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do not imagine our
life
without
Technics
and
news
.Currently, young
people
spend their
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time
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watching TV or watching
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phone
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on
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online.We can know the
news
of the world very quickly through the internet
of
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telephone even while staying at home.Television and some modern
Technics
very
easily
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and
favorable
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for modern
people's
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.
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,we
able
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to telephone or computer in
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the online
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created different
website
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websites
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such
as BBS
news
,YouTube,Instagram and
other
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others
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. In conclusion,
people
should be protected
get
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news
and for old men and women through the radio and modern
people
think that
the
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modern
Technics
is more comfortable and
easily
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.
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