Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while believe that television is better for this purpose.Discuss both views and give your opinion
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a great
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answering
awarding
news
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interested
news
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news
.Some old people
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novelty
sooth
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smooth
this
bring
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brings
People
should always be aware of the news
,and this
is very important for their life
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can be left behind Correct pronoun usage
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and because of this
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their phone
phone
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phones
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news
of the world very quickly through the internet of
telephone even while staying at home.Television and some modern Correct your spelling
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favourable
people's
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people
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the online
an online
website
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websites
such
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.
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others
people
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to get
news
and for old men and women through the radio and modern people
think that the
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is more comfortable and easily
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easy
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