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Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that some
people
 think that the
newspaper
 is the best
way
 to collect the latest
information
 as it is more fruitful than other forms of media. Whereas, some
people
 have different aspects about
this
 idea. I personally believe that nowadays other platforms are more influential than newspapers.
First
 I will discuss some ideas supporting my ideas about
this
 statement , after ,that I will present some aspects. On the one hand,
people
 believe that other forms of media are more useful than newspapers because to read a
newspaper
 one should need proper
time
 and place where he can sit and collect
information
 but in today’s fast ,life no one has enough
time
 to read newspapers. Everyone is in hurry to reach their respective places on
time
. For ,example an individual who travels daily by car will always prefer to utilise that
time
 while listening to the radio. On the other hand, many
people
 agree with
this
 statement for many reasons but I believe that only
people
 of old age might agree with
this
 statement. As in ancient ,
times
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 there were no other facilities to get daily news. The
newspaper
 was the only
way
. As well as
people
 from old times have not had enough knowledge to operate new media resources
such
 as Television, mobile phones, radio etc.
This
 could be the reason they find the
newspaper
 is the best
way
 to
way
 to get
information
. At
last
, the
newspaper
 might be the best
way
 to get the latest
information
 but the daily life schedule of today.’s generation should not be ignored.
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