Small businesses are disappearing and are being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Lately, it has been observed that big companies are overpowering the market and

as a result

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of that, small businesses are suffering to a large extent. Though there are a few disadvantages like the loss of jobs for people doing small businesses, I think it is better from the perspective of consumers.

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, I would like to cite examples of retail chains like Reliance

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or Aditya Birla’s More supermarket or online groceries. In our childhood days we used to buy goods from local

shops

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only and whatever they would provide us

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the only option for us. But nowadays, after the introduction of big retail chains like

reliance fresh

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Reliance Fresh

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, More from Aditya Birla, and online groceries like – Bigbasket and Grofers, customers now have more choices and they get good discounts as well. In the

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supermarkets they get everything under one roof. Earlier people had to buy different products from different

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. For example, earlier if I had to buy vegetables

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exercise books ,I had to visit two different

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, but now I can get everything under one roof which saves me time.

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, if I continue to discuss the retail industry only, there are some disadvantages as well, like the small businessmen are facing stiff competition now. They

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much less revenue compared to earlier. Even I have seen a few

shops

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have closed

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a lack of customers. So, many people are becoming jobless and they are forced to think of new ways of earning. In conclusion, I would like to mention that, if we consider all aspects,

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I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I

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think that seeing the trend it seems that in future we will have very specific types of small businesses available which are not direct competitors of a big business.

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task response

Make sure to clearly address all parts of the essay prompt. In this case, discuss both advantages and disadvantages of big companies replacing small businesses.

coherence cohesion

To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure smoother transitions between ideas and paragraphs. Use linking words more effectively to connect your ideas and arguments.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Displacement
Economies of scale
Local economies
Standardization
Cultural homogenization
Personalized service
Innovation
Community investments
Environmental impact
Competitive prices
Tax contributions
Job losses
Cultural diversity
Local employment opportunities

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