Small businesses are disappearing and are being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Lately, it has been observed that big companies are overpowering the market and
as a result
of that, small businesses are suffering to a large extent. Though there are a few disadvantages like the loss of jobs for people doing small businesses, I think it is better from the perspective of consumers.
Firstly
, I would like to cite examples of retail chains like Reliance fresh
or Aditya Birla’s More supermarket or online groceries. In our childhood days we used to buy goods from local Capitalize word
Fresh
shops
only and whatever they would provide us were
the only option for us. But nowadays, after the introduction of big retail chains like Correct subject-verb agreement
was
reliance fresh
, More from Aditya Birla, and online groceries like – Bigbasket and Grofers, customers now have more choices and they get good discounts as well. In the Correct your spelling
Reliance Fresh
,
supermarkets they get everything under one roof. Earlier people had to buy different products from different Remove the comma
apply
shops
. For example, earlier if I had to buy vegetables as well as
exercise books ,I had to visit two different shops
, but now I can get everything under one roof which saves me time.
However
, if I continue to discuss the retail industry only, there are some disadvantages as well, like the small businessmen are facing stiff competition now. They are having
much less revenue compared to earlier. Even I have seen a few Wrong verb form
have
shops
have closed due to
a lack of customers. So, many people are becoming jobless and they are forced to think of new ways of earning.
In conclusion, I would like to mention that, if we consider all aspects, then
I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I also
think that seeing the trend it seems that in future we will have very specific types of small businesses available which are not direct competitors of a big business.Submitted by deb.baguiati on
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task response
Make sure to clearly address all parts of the essay prompt. In this case, discuss both advantages and disadvantages of big companies replacing small businesses.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure smoother transitions between ideas and paragraphs. Use linking words more effectively to connect your ideas and arguments.