Small businesses are disappearing and are being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Lately, it has been observed that big companies are overpowering the market and

as a result

of that, small businesses are suffering to a large extent. Though there are a few disadvantages like the loss of jobs for people doing small businesses, I think it is better from the perspective of consumers.

Firstly

, I would like to cite examples of retail chains like Reliance

fresh

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Fresh

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or Aditya Birla’s More supermarket or online groceries. In our childhood days we used to buy goods from local

shops

only and whatever they would provide us

were

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was

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the only option for us. But nowadays, after the introduction of big retail chains like

reliance fresh

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Reliance Fresh

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, More from Aditya Birla, and online groceries like – Bigbasket and Grofers, customers now have more choices and they get good discounts as well. In the

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supermarkets they get everything under one roof. Earlier people had to buy different products from different

shops

. For example, earlier if I had to buy vegetables

as well as

exercise books ,I had to visit two different

shops

, but now I can get everything under one roof which saves me time.

However

, if I continue to discuss the retail industry only, there are some disadvantages as well, like the small businessmen are facing stiff competition now. They

are having

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much less revenue compared to earlier. Even I have seen a few

shops

have closed

due to

a lack of customers. So, many people are becoming jobless and they are forced to think of new ways of earning. In conclusion, I would like to mention that, if we consider all aspects,

then

I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I

also

think that seeing the trend it seems that in future we will have very specific types of small businesses available which are not direct competitors of a big business.

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task response

Make sure to clearly address all parts of the essay prompt. In this case, discuss both advantages and disadvantages of big companies replacing small businesses.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

305 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Displacement
Economies of scale
Local economies
Standardization
Cultural homogenization
Personalized service
Innovation
Community investments
Environmental impact
Competitive prices
Tax contributions
Job losses
Cultural diversity
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