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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is urged by some
people
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 that learning a foreign
language
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 is only one
reason
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 to go abroad and
work
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 while others believe that there are other reasons for someone who
study
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 a foreign
language
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. In my opinion, I think that there is not only one
reason
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 for
people
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 should
study
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 a
second
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language
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. On the one hand, there are
people
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 who take the view that most employers learn to be able to
work
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 in other
countries
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. The most compelling
reason
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 for believing
this
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 is that they are able to get new job opportunities by studying other
countries
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’
languages
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.
For example
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, most youngsters who finished their academic education used to attend classes teaching foreign
languages
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 so that they want to get jobs in that foreign country.
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, nowadays
people
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 are exploring job vacancies and they decided to learn
languages
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 according to
countries
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 where there are many open positions for foreigners.
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, I am of the view that
people
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 should
study
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 other
languages
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 due to the numerous benefits that they can achieve in their lives. The most convincing
reason
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 for believing
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 is that linguists can achieve many chances to get jobs both locally and globally.
In addition
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,
language
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 is a key to opening the world to communicate with different
people
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 and different cultures not only to
work
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 but
also
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 to extend
study
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 in foreign
countries
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.
For instance
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,
although
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, English is international langue, international students who want to extend their
study
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 in abroad need to sit for their
language
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 tests according to the
countries
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 in which they
study
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.
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, there will be a lot of changes in local for polyglots
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 as working as a trainer which is high-paid in
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 centres or as translators in the foreign embassy which is open in the local country. To sum up,
although
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people
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 tend to
study
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 other
languages
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 to
work
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 in another country, I believe that there are other reasons for
people
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 who should learn
languages
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 to achieve benefits in both local and foreign.
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