Sport Should Be Compulsory In School. To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree?
Since
beginning
of the modern education, there have been several dilemmas about Add an article
the beginning
context
of subjects. There is much debate over Add an article
the context
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whether sport
sport
should be obligatory in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
school
or not. Correct your spelling
Even though
Eventhough
doing Correct your spelling
Even though
sport
can be dangerous for Fix the agreement mistake
sports
students
,ı strongly believe that,
integrating Remove the comma
apply
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
in
a certain level into Change preposition
at
students
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students'
student's
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lives
lifes
can help Correct your spelling
lives
to
live a Correct pronoun usage
them to
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healthy
healty
life.
Some parents consider doing Correct your spelling
healthy
sport
dangerous for their Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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children
schildren
as some Correct your spelling
children
sport
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sports
such
as basketball and football may cause a
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apply
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serious
seious
injuries. Correct your spelling
serious
Hence
, sport
must Fix the agreement mistake
sports
be do
in front of a supervisor for Change the verb form
be done
school
-age children. Unfortunately, schools don't have enough capacity to fulfill
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fulfil
teacher
for Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
each
every student. Correct determiner usage
apply
For example
, mounting evidence concerning this
issue suggests that the most of accidents Correct your spelling
occurring
occuring
in the Correct your spelling
occurring
school
originate from unconscious way to
doing Change preposition
of
sport
. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
Therefore
, some parents consider sport
shouldn't be compulsory in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
school's
curriculum
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the school's
On the other hand
, according to a great number of researches
, starting Correct your spelling
researchers
sport
in
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at
school age
avoid having some disease Add a hyphen
school-age
such
as Correct your spelling
diabetes
diabete
or health problems in Correct your spelling
diabetes
elderly
ages. Correct article usage
the elderly
Thus
, if Add an article
the school
a school
school
can achieve that Fix the agreement mistake
schools
involving
the Change preposition
by involving
sport
into
children's life even little , it would prevent living in Change preposition
in
a unwanted conditions
. Correct the article-noun agreement
unwanted conditions
an unwanted condition
In addition
, as far as thousands of doctors are concerned, people who are between 11 to 21 years old ought to do sport
for development
of Add an article
the development
boddies
physically and Correct your spelling
bodies
having
a nice condition for their hearts.
In conclusion, nowadays whether Wrong verb form
have
sport
should be compulsory in Add an article
the sport
a sport
school
or not remains a controversial issue, however
, I completely agree with the statement that having a sport
habit in Change the verb form
sporting
students
Change noun form
students'
student's
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lives
life
lifes
helps to live a healthy life, despite that sometimes Correct your spelling
lives
sport
could be
cause Unnecessary verb
apply
injuiring
the Correct your spelling
injuring
students
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