In a number countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other belives that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
The
first
group of individuals Correct your spelling
believe
belive
that a huge amount of budget out Correct your spelling
believe
to
be spent Fix the infinitive
apply
for
the construction of new railway lines for imported and as well as Change preposition
on
high speed
trains. Add a hyphen
high-speed
However
, the second
group of humans think that the government should spend the money for recovering conveyances of the public. In my opinion, even though
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also
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are also
for
to use Change preposition
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busses
because they are cheap and move quickly inside the urban areas from one point to another.
On the right hand, there is Correct your spelling
a big
abig
demand for Correct your spelling
a big
the
railway transportation. Correct article usage
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Although
their tickets are precious it includes all the amenities for their passengers. For instance
, it is more commonly used by tourists because it is convenient for traveling
from one city to another. During the trip, they can even sleep, have Change the spelling
travelling
a
lunch and take a shower. Remove the article
apply
Hence
, after getting off the train instead
of going to restaurant
they could take a tour without wasting a time and money.
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the restaurant
On the other hand
, there is a minus about busses
. Though they are cheap some of them do not have an air conditioning system and they are small. Take for example
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this kind
these kinds
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my country. They are too and there are cracks inside the Change preposition
in
busses
which may split the transport Correct your spelling
in
un
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in
Therefore
, in many
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any
case
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cases
this
has resulted in a car accident.
In conclusion, I think that even though trains go faster than buses people still prefer the busses
because they are not expensive and they do not require extra documents.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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