In a number countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other belives that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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because they are not expensive and they do not require extra documents.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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connectivity
economic growth
sustainable development
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modernization
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commuters
traffic congestion
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urban
rural
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