In a number countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other belives that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

The
first
group of individuals
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belive
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that a huge amount of budget out
to
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be spent
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the construction of new railway lines for imported and as well as
high speed
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trains.
However
, the
second
group of humans think that the government should spend the money for recovering conveyances of the public. In my opinion, even
though
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trains
also
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needed
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to use
busses
because they are cheap and move quickly inside the urban areas from one point to another. On the right hand, there is
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a big
abig
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a big
demand for
the
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railway transportation.
Although
their tickets are precious it includes all the amenities for their passengers.
For instance
, it is more commonly used by tourists because it is convenient for
traveling
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from one city to another. During the trip, they can even sleep, have
a
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lunch and take a shower.
Hence
, after getting off the train
instead
of going to
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they could take a tour without wasting a time and money.
On the other hand
, there is a minus about
busses
. Though they are cheap some of them do not have an air conditioning system and they are small. Take
for example
these kind
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of public vehicles
of
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my country. They are too and there are cracks inside the
busses
which may split the transport
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un
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half.
Therefore
, in
many
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case
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,
this
has resulted in a car accident. In conclusion, I think that even though trains go faster than buses people still prefer the
busses
because they are not expensive and they do not require extra documents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • sustainable development
  • environmentally friendly
  • cost-effective
  • public transport
  • maintenance issues
  • demographic
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • commuters
  • traffic congestion
  • private vehicles
  • urban
  • rural
  • balanced approach
  • transportation needs
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