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Your next- door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of land music , you often lose sleep.

#next- #door #neighbour #music #night #land
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been living in
this
 apartment
since
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 ten years. I have always been
responsible
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 tenant. Especially I
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am
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responsible
responsilible
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responsible
to
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 my neighbours who
is
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 living in
this
 building I would like to
a
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problem. I have one problem with one of my
next
-door. A
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couple
couble
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couple
months
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 ago, Mrs Sara moved into a new apartment_ right
next
 door to my home. The woman is interested in listening to music really loud after midnight and it has
effected
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to
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my sleep . I can easily hear it in my bedroom. I am suffering from it. As you know, I have to wake up at six  o 'clock every morning . Based on the building's regulations people not
allow
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 to make noise after 10P.M I think that
,
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she is not aware of
these law
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. I request you prevent
this
 incident. Thank you for your attention to
this
 important matter.
Mrs.
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 Sara.
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