You're planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: 1. Describe the vacation spot you have chosen 2. Explain how you plan to spend your time there 3. Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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Dear John, How 're you? Guess what? I'm planning a trip for the Christmas holidays. It would be for 7 days. I will be happy if we both will be together. Let me describe the venue. I've selected Montreal because it is a well-known place for the celebration of Christmas. There is a Santa parade on the day of December 25, followed by a ride. It is a unique experience to see the occasion. Plus, they will show the film on

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day with 3D views, which I want to experience. I've created a whole week plan, I promise you'll enjoy these days. I've searched various tourist places. We'll visit a famous park which is decorated with twinkling lights, there is a natural ice-skating spot which is free for visitors. We will

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enjoy the journey by boat to showcase the beauty of the mountains. With

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warm heart, I want you to join me during

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vacation period. If you have any question write me back. See you soon. Best regards,

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task

Clarify the itinerary for the week to enhance understanding.

coherence

Separate different ideas into paragraphs, like describing activities and then inviting the friend.

content

You provide detailed descriptions of the activities planned during the vacation.

language

The letter has a friendly and inviting tone.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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