Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health.

Smoking

tobacco

has been a popular culture among

people

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centuries ago. The tradition itself has a rich background history through the decades.

However

, It is becoming a worrying problem that more and more young

people

are being affected by smoking

tobacco

. It contributes to some serious

health

and financial issues among them. I believe there are several possible solutions for that. To take effective actions, we should

first

acknowledge what causes it to be popular among young men. A major reason for

this

is the lack of education on smoking taught at school. The education system teaches them that smoking is bad but the offspring are never taught why it is

such

an adverse habit.

Also

, they have been hugely influenced by media and films in a way that makes them have false impressions about smoking

tobacco

. What is more, the peer trend produces most smokers. In most cases,

people

start smoking because their friend or older child offered them cigarettes. Needless to say, it is common knowledge that smoking for a long period of time harms overall

health

by causing some serious illnesses. One of its main targets of the body is the lung and young

people

are even more susceptible to the consequences of smoking.

Moreover

, the habit itself

also

oppresses young

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financially. They are mostly dependent on their parents and by having

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such

bad habits, they usually face difficulties with their money. So what can we do about

this

?

First

of all, parents should try to improve their supervision of their kids. They should pay attention to the media their kids watch and what friends they have.

Secondly

, the rules over the media should be strict to some extent by reducing the number of appearances of smoking. Most importantly, schools must improve their education on

health

subjects by thoroughly teaching them how bad habits ruin their

health

. Though smoking

tobacco

is a part of our history,

this

shouldn’t be affecting our future generations. We can prevent our offspring from suffering chronic diseases by taking

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effective number of actions.