In some cultures, children are often told that they achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world,

children

are mostly groomed with the

message

to push hard to achieve any

target

.

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advantages of

this

approach including personal development and aiming for higher goals.

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also

provide the certain disadvantages of

this

message

including

children

can become unproductive and can’t expressively take practical life challenges. The major advantages of striving harder can benefit

children

to be more resilient and

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for impossibles. If the

children

are fed that hardships are obvious while achieving the aims but the way forward is pushing hard to overcome those challenges

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then

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they reach

to

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their milestones.

For instance

, Messi- a

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world-renowned

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world renowned

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world-renowned

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football player, was unable to run properly in his childhood but with the

message

of hard

work

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he

was emerged

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as the best player.

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,

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hard enough is really associated with

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substantial

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substantial

benefits.

However

, pushing harder for a

target

can sometimes cause detrimental effects

such

as

children

can become unproductive and

face

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difficulties in daily life.

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children

target

something outside their capacities and nature. In

such

cases, applying the

message

of

push

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pushing

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hard, they lost all of the

times

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time

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and waste their energy in

this

race. That’s why they become inefficient and find

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it

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if

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it

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difficult to handle other challenges as they grow. In conclusion,

children

are mostly communicated to try hard to land on their milestones.

This

can yield certain advantages

such

as strong personality traits and ambitious aims while having some negative aspects causing

children

to become less productive and face problems in daily life proceedings.