You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In you letter - explain the problem - suggest a solution - say what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am your

-door neighbour and writing

this

letter to complain about a problem that your kid has caused

last

night. As you are aware that we both are parking our cars in front of the playground.

Last

night, I guess your elder son took your car in the evening and while returning back home, he was trying to park the automobile

to my motor but unfortunately it hit my car and damaged the headlight completely.

Moreover

, I could not able to start my Jeep after

this

incident. I think it would be great if you could either pay the full amount for repair or claim insurance for

this

, kindly phone them as soon as possible to repair my vehicle. I hope you will consider my suggestions and If I don't get any response from you by today, I have to lodge a complaint against you and your son for the damage done. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Venkatesh Ravichandran

Submitted by crvenkatesh1904 on Wed Nov 30 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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