Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in response to your advert for an Admin Assistant in the IT department AIIB on your official

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page on 30th November. I hold a bachelor's degree from Aberystwyth University and a master's degree from the University of Birmingham.

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, I have

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and a half years of work experience in the International Business Machine Corporation (IBM)

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I was working as an IT system consultant. More importantly, from October 2018 to September 2019, I participated in the Expense Management system application project at AIIB and worked as a business consultant.

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, to some extent, I am familiar with some of the administrative processes and organisations in AIIB, which I believe would make me

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eligible for

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job

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position. I have enclosed my resume in both Chinese and English. Could you please give me feedback at your earliest convenience

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on whether

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my qualifications and work experience meet your requirements

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I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Bin Han

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Nov 30, 2022

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improvement

Add a line to show how you fit the job and what you can do for AIIB.

structure

Break the long second paragraph into two; put one idea in each paragraph.

grammar

Fix small errors: 'there and a half' -> 'one and a half', 'feedback' -> 'I would be glad to hear from you' or 'Please let me know'

tone

Keep a formal but clear tone; end with a short call to action, like 'I look forward to your reply'.

tone

Polite and formal tone in opening and closing.

content

The letter lists key degree and work exp that show fit.

content

It mentions a real project at AIIB, which links to the job.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

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