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Nowadays social media addiction become trend discuss about causes and effects for this problem?

#media #addiction #trend #effects
In recent years, with improvements in technology , communication ways have changed completely.
people
 now are spending much more time on social
media
 to keep themselves updated,
As a result
 , we are facing addiction to social
media
 which is affecting our health. From a psychological point of view,
people
 suffering from a lack of self-confidence are more active on social
media
. In fact, it seems that
,
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they can hide in the virtual world
hence
, they have a chance to present themselves with other personalities.
Moreover
, a hectic lifestyle needs advanced communication tools as well, in other statements, another reason which makes
people
to
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use social
media
 more is , they can access
to
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many things at the same time ,
for instance
, checking
news
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, buying online and hanging out online with a friend, so these are the main merits of
this
 system.
Nevertheless
, addiction to social
media
 is
of
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the
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 sophisticated problem. Not only it brings some mental issues like depression but, it
also
 brings some physical problems
such
 as obesity.
Furthermore
, if a person sits most of his time on a chair, he will have some problems which I mentioned before.
Also
 , as we see many
people
 who are addicted to social
media
 are avoiding communicating with other
people
 in the real world.
Thus
 these are the bad impact of
this
 system.
Last
 but not least,
although
 online systems have brought us lots of good things,
which
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we cannot deny the negative side of it too. I believe that
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 how to use social
media
 should be taught to the majority of
people
 , in order to keep them safe from the demerit side of it
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