14. Whoever control the media also control opinion and attitude of the people and then is a little that can be done to rectify this. To what extend to you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, television

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is a hot and trending topic. Many believe that

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giving biased opinions towards the topic and forcing people to believe in their

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controlling opinion. To explain more, many political parties are funding the

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channel and in return they want them to run favourable

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image amongst the audience.

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about parties that are in power and they receive regular threats from them.

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, viewers believe what has been shown to them and they agree with

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. To add more, big

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houses are hungry for the TRP.

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that can bring maximum views on their channel by breaking them

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picture. Many cases have been there where they have predicted the result before legal authorities.

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is covering and showing live on their channels for TRP without thinking that terrorists were watching that telecast and

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helping them to change their strategy.

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have to research

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and everything about the case before publishing them. To sum up, new channels need to do some research and give some relevant and unbiased information to their regular viewers. So that they can know the truth and

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decide which side they have to favour.

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14. Whoever control the media also control opinion and attitude of the people and then is a little that can be done to rectify this. To what extend to you agree or disagree.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companie. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

The percentage of overweight children in western countries has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lesson about work abs become more disciplined other argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion?