Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the global warming issue has been

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spread

spreaded

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over the world.

Therefore

, the international

community

should

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responsibility

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to take action

for

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these problem

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. There are many reasons

for

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the global warming has

been

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spread over the world. I will give the reasons and

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solution

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solustion

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solution

of

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this

situation in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many reasons

of

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increased global warming.

Firstly

, the main reason is a

forest

has been destroyed by

human

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, they built

high rise

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buildings and factories replaced

to

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the

forest

. The

forest

become

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concrete

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jungle.

Secondly

, these days everyone has

individual

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vehicle.

Therefore

, air pollution has been spread. As a

results

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, oxygen is decreased and carbon dioxide is

a

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increased in

atmosphere

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. The solution

of

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maintain

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global warming in the atmosphere which international

community

should make laws for people who construct

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that

fine

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for

cut

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the trees.

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, the international

community

should

do

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not

permission

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to destroy

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the forest

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forest

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and make

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a house

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house

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.

In addition

, the international

community

and national

community

also

make laws

for

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decline

the

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air pollution.

For example

, the Indian government promote electric vehicles because people less consume

flue

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and decline air pollution. In conclusion, it is

biggest

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problem

over

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world

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. So,

international

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the international

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community

and national

community

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communities

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meet

matual

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manual

mutual

mature

create laws to

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global warming

issue

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.