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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Laziz DOMLA: Some
people
 believe that
people
 who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Beside a lot of advantages, some
people
 believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement? Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for
this
 is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what
extent
 do you agree or With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Cultural tourism, where
people
 travel in order to visit museums, monuments and archaeological sites among other things, is a growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation’s cultural heritage, but can
also
 cause problems. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement? Some
people
 think that teachers at school are more responsible for children’s intellectual and social development than parent. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? What is your personal opinion? The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for
people
 to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge …‌‌ Translation: en-en The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for
people
 to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge …‌‌ Some
people
 feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, when other
people
 like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do … Some
people
 think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air-force just like men. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries.
In other words
, it is an international problem. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? Some
people
 think that dangerous sports
such
 as boxing or motor-racing should be banned. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement?
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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