Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
day and age, international travel seems to be popular for people
from many parts of the world. Some say going overseas is necessary as a means of learning, while opponents to this
way of thinking believe people
can also
acquire knowledge
from television
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a television
program
or online websites. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
This
essay will discuss both views before deducting my personal opinion, using examples from the Chinese government and Oxford University to demonstrate arguments.
On the one hand, the importance of travelling toward learning cannot be neglected, since the first
-hand experience tourists can have from visiting can better facilitate people
's understandings
. By visiting foreign places, Fix the agreement mistake
understanding
people
are able to communicate with indigenous inhabitants, participate in local cultural ceremonies and immerse themselves into
a foreign language. All of these exposures can leave them Change preposition
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an
in-depth understanding of a nation's culture, history and customs. Change preposition
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For instance
, recent research by the Chinese government shows that 80% of Chinese travellers stated that they can have a deeper impression about
the romantic and artistic characteristics of Paris after talking with residents in French and visiting local galleries. Change preposition
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In contrast
, learning from TV
program or online Add an article
a TV
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messages
are
rather passive as a way to receive and digest Change the verb form
is
such
abstract information. Therefore
, it is conclusively clear that travelling abroad is an effective way for tourists to comprehend knowledge
related to foreign countries.
On the other hand
, those who believe television
and the internet can replace travelling as the means of learning about other countries would provide the following reason. By concluding useful knowledge
and displing useless information, an educational documentary on television
or a professional-edited video on the internet allows watchers to acquire more well-rounded knowledge
in a short period of time, while people
may find it hard to achieve the same outcome via travelling. For instance
, an extensive study by Oxford University indicates that the knowledge
about a new place, including historical stories and local cultural mores that one could learn during a 7-day international tour only takes up to 30% of the contents in a 2-hour documentary on television
. Thus
, it is possible to state beyond doubt that television
shows and online websites would provide more comprehensive information for people
, which makes travelling unnecessary.
In conclusion, it is true that going overseas can provide people
actual
experience and impressions, even though TV shows and internet pages can allow Change preposition
with actual
people
to acquire more knowledge
. In my opinion, travelling abroad is a necessity, due to the fact that first
-hand experience that people
can have from exposures
is precious and an important part of learning.Fix the agreement mistake
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