Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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years, many humans a lot

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smoking everywhere.

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business

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forbid smoking in any of their own

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because they haven't

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responsibility

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their

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public.

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governments

government

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governments

emphasize that have prohibited smoking in over the world because they say that smoking is very

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detrimental

deterimental

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for

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health. I completely

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idea because when

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smoking

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where they want places, it is more

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. On the one hand,

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companies

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employer banned smoking, it is useful for their

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because if their employees more smoking, it may be very harmful

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adolescents

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in the

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cigarette's

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fire

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to their furniture so it is harmful

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financial

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budget.

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, currently according to statistics, 90% of fires are caused by cigarette butts.

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company

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banned smoking only

their

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own office.

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public

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people

prohibit smoking in all public

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because it is more harmful

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environment

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because it emitted

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detrimental

subtances

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substances

caused to

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pollution

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pollution

.

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they want smoking

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decreased

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humans in their nation.

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, some humans say that

,

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some

people

believe that smoking should be allowed outside of work, because if some

people

don't smoke, they may become

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an addict

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addict

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.

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, 90

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of smokers experience premature

aging

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because smoking can

also

shorten their lifespan. In conclusion, some

company

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banned smoking

to

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employees in their

office

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because they always think

themselves

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benefits

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. In my opinion, smoking should be banned for everyone