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Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

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We all are aware of the fact that "The more we read more we learn" and the best way to do
this
 is through books, or in the current fast-moving lifestyle, we can say, E-books. There is a debate going on among people, of which some think, due to easily accessible internet services offline reading in
libraries
 becomes old fashioned and there is no need for these large and quiet rooms. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss why I don’t agree with
this
 thought. With the advent of networking technology
such
 as the World Wide
Web
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 you can easily get any kind of data, irrespective of the study genre. Some individuals think that there is no need for
libraries
 with large shelves and study tables, as they think, it becomes very easy and fast to get numerous informative materials on the web. They believe that setting up
libraries
 is wasting of resources, and the utilized expense should be utilized somewhere else to get the other benefits. Why I disagree with
this
 theory, is because of the fact,
libraries
 are dedicated places that are specially set up to create a suitable environment for learning and reading. We know
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fact that the internet greatly reduces the effort to get a large chunk of data in a fraction of
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, but,
still
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 there is some reliability issue, by
this
, I mean that on digital platforms anyone can build their websites to spread information, no matter it is true or false.
This
 can lead to the spreading of misinformation.
On the other hand
, books are written by genuine authors and are analyzed by editors and various members of the publishing firm which maintain the genuineness of the things recorded in hard copy media files. Another benefit of
this
 is it helps to build reading habits. To conclude, I can say there is an immense growth of the internet and its easy availability, but,
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libraries
, whether they are public or private holds a greater value.
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