Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other

transportation

modes is considered by some

people

as one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem. I believe there are positives and negatives to

this

approach which I will analyze in

this

essay.

First

of all, I agree that increasing the cost of fuel for

cars

and other vehicles is one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem

,

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because nowadays there are too many

cars

running on the roads. Almost everyone has a car and

do

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not like to use public

transportation

because it is difficult to go to work by bus or metro

especially

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from the suburbs.

However

, if the government raises the price of petrol and

make

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their public

transportation

systems more enticing, it will make citizens more likely to utilize it. There are multiple methods that the government could implement to persuade

people

to make more use of public transport and stop using their own

cars

.

For example

, if

people

can get a discount for taking public

transportation

, they will be willing to do it from time to time. The government could

also

implement and build infrastructure and systems for

people

to ride their bicycles. If it is convenient for everyone to rent bikes from one place and return to another, it will become more popular for

people

to use

it

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and will reduce the amount of time they spend driving their

cars

which will have a positive effect on the environment.

On the other hand

, it is not only because of

people

driving

cars

and the resultant carbon dioxide emissions that the

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is having a negative impact on the environment, there are a plethora of other factors which are

also

contributing to

this

impact. According to many studies, climate change is caused by many different factors which include(s) making (processing meat) products related to meat, manufacturing factories, agricultural fertilization to grow crops...etc.

Therefore

, all of these factors and different areas of human activity cause environmental problems which

results

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in climate change. In conclusion, though there are many issues which contribute to the environmental problem, I believe increasing the price of fuel will have an overall positive effect by encouraging

people

to utilize different modes of transport and

consequently

reduce the negative impact on the environment.