21st century has begun.What you think about it in will be changed

Today, there is no secret that human beings were evaluated as 1st monkeys and nowadays we can fly to the moon and visit others countries without hesitation by [planes. All of these changes commence in the 21st
century
. It](http: //planes. It) means that the new
century
will be more deadly interesting and
also
will have more secret details than current
century
Why? Since 1st argument in my 1st answer will be that the 22
century
will give us if we for sure still live, a lot of evaluated things.
For example
, nowadays people do not have any opportunity to fly by their hands or they are thinking about outstanding cars that will have their own ability to fly but it definitely takes a lot of [time. ](http: //time. My)
Furthermore
, my 2nd argument will have another side of coming to us 22
century
since we do not know our planet Earth at all. How? We have all information about Earth and their citizens. But we do not know what other stuff does have an ocean? Our ocean has been researched at a little percentage at all. So, as i recapitulated, the 21st
century
will be leaving as a most modern
century
that touched with our lives face to face. According to all my arguments in the 22nd
century
, all of our stuff that remaining in a secretive way will have another chance to shine bright like a diamond.
Furthermore
, I hope that we will have a new types of strategy to rebuild our generation in a more modern way.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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