Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and expect scientists to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes do you like to see in your new century?

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The
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we live in is changing rapidly in every aspect.Advancements have been made in every field but new challenges
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arise every
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.For the better part,I agree that
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would definitely work for the betterment like they always have done but what we must keep in our mind is that future would have its own challenges,the major one of which is the young generation pulling out itself from
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with,
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have always been an asset to the
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we live in.
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,in the recent pandemic of COVID-19
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from all over the
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devoted themselves and worked
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and night in order to find a vaccine.To reiterate,these people of
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have always tried their best and have truly proven themselves and we could expect the same from them in the future.
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,what we must not forget is that the new century would present its own challenges,the major problem we may face is the lack of interest in
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subjects by our young generation. The
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in the present
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does not promote and benefits
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the same way that it does other professionals.
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,if we look at the richest professions in the
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,we would likely see sportsmen and artists but very few researchers and technology.
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,
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lack of fame and money in
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field does not attract youngsters, as other professions do.
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,in the new
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I would like to see better recognition of people of
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that devote themselves
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and night in order to make our lives easier.If a society appreciates its heroes
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it may give rise to many more
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as
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from all over the
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trying to move towards the countries
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as USA and Japan where their work is better appreciated.
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,in order to give birth to more genius minds we have to give due recognition to the current ones. To conclude, the sun of the new century has arisen and just like the previous thousands of years we put our trust in the brilliant minds of our
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.
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,the new time would present advanced problems for which we would require them to work harder than ever,which is only possible if we give them their due regard.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Breakthroughs
  • Incurable diseases
  • Rapid development
  • Vaccines
  • Technological advancements
  • Automation
  • Efficiency
  • Cautious optimism
  • Ethical issues
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Renewable energy
  • Climate change
  • Collaboration
  • Global issues
  • Wealth disparity
  • Innovative
  • Economic policies
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