You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the opportunity to shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner describing what you need and asking whether they have these items and what they cost
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to make an inquiry to buy some furniture. My friend introduced me to your store as it carries great but cheap
second
-hand furniture.
As I have recently moved into a new flat, I’d like to furnish it, especially for my bedroom and living room. The main big things that I’m looking for are a two-seat sofa, a single metal bed, a bedside table
, a coffee table
and a set of
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table
with four chairs.
May I know if you have any good deals for the items I mentioned above? I’d prefer to have a black leather sofa and a white coffee Fix the agreement mistake
tables
table
. As for the bed, it’d be good if it can be assembled instead
of one piece as it’d be easier to pack when I move out in the near future.
Can you please let me know how much for each item if
you have them? Would there be any discount if I buy any purchase worth a certain amount of money? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Thanks and regards,
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