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There are some people who like to work alone. Others prefer to work with coworkers. What are some advantages and disadvantages of working with coworkers in a team? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is clear that many people prefer to
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 with co-workers
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 of working individually.
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 teamwork provides some positive benefits, I think conflicts between
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members
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 are completely unavoidable. On the one hand, there are some advantages when people get involved in working together.
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, by exchanging information with one another, individuals can share good ideas and assign
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 effectively.
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, when carrying out a new
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,
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members
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 always have frequent meetings to express opinions, divide the parts of
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, and support each other so that they can meet their deadlines, which helps create innovative ideas to achieve a breakthrough as well as complete the
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 on schedule.
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, practical and useful skills can be developed simultaneously. In fact, they can know how to
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 in a
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 smoothly, support each other to deal with difficult problems and gain invaluable experience from each individual.
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, there are some disadvantages of working with co-workers.
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, workers easily suffer conflicts.
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, when choosing the best solution to a certain problem, heated arguments among
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members
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 are inevitable, which may cause internal disunity.
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, some
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 can become entirely dependent on others. In fact, those with low ability often have a tendency not to complete their parts even though the
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 has been equally assigned, leading to some delay in the
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’s assigned
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. In conclusion, teamwork shows both positive and negative aspects. In some cases, it is better to
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 individually, but with large projects, it is more effective to
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 together because the
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 completion time can be shortened and the final result can be spectacular.

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