You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Saman, How are you doing? I hope everything goes well after leaving school. I received your letter two days ago which was asking about whether find a
job
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or start attending college for
further
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education.
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, I think going to college will not be enjoyable for you because course prices are too expensive these days. I heard your father lost his
job
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due to the government's decision to stop development projects in Sri Lanka. I believe finding a
job
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can be helpful to support your family's expenses. I'm sure they feel comfortable with it. I remember you had good knowledge of Infomation Technology at the school.
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, I think a
job
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which is in the Information Technology field is suitable for you. These days that kind of
job
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has lots of opportunities. And
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, you can save money for your higher education in the future. I wish you good luck in your future endeavours. Your loving friend, Suranga
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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