In many countries, young people move to cities leaving their homes in rural areas for work or study. What do you think are the reasons for it? Do you think the advantages of moving to cities outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays young
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migration from
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to urban areas for study or work is increasing. In
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essay, I am trying to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of
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phenomenon and
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the causes. In the beginning, I should say the common reason for
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issue is that the facilities in the
cities
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more than in the
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as universities, libraries, and big companies.
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finding a job or developing that because of the opportunity in the
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is easier than anywhere else.
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for study people have more options to choose a university or a major. In spite of the fact that there are more facilities in the
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but there are some drawbacks there,
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, stress and hectic life are the reasons urban lifestyle. And moving from village to
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cause decries the work power of the village and affects the agriculture system and
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reducing making food for humans. In my opinion, less workforce easily can replace by machines and humans can improve their work or study. I believe that studying or working in the
cities
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can improve the life level of the
villages
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in the long term because some of the graduating people came back to the suburb and automatically suburban areas can improve after a few years.
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, I believe that living in the
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outweighs the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment opportunities
  • career growth
  • educational facilities
  • universities
  • technical colleges
  • specialized institutions
  • infrastructure
  • amenities
  • healthcare facilities
  • public transportation systems
  • cultural activities
  • recreational activities
  • cost of living
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • career advancement
  • government policies
  • mitigate downsides
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