Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and expect scientists to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes do you like to see in your new century?

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life becomes easy as compared to the past because at that time there were
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there are so many positive researches are made.
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today we reached
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credit goes to our
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. Even we can not imagine
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. In my opinion, I believe that today's revolution of technologies
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only possible by
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. Because they are doing so
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research on how can be better
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our past.
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NASA and Space X are finding a way easy and budgetary way to reach
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the moon and the marsh. On my point of view,
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should bring changes in many
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high-speed transportation methods, the digitalization of payment
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, cyber security, and much more.
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, recently some experiments are going on that how can vehicle will run on
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of the Hydrogen fuel. If
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carbon emissions will be reduced by 60 to 70%. To summarise, we definitely
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that the contribution of
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is very huge and they can be a revolutionary change for the world.
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  • Automation
  • Efficiency
  • Cautious optimism
  • Ethical issues
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Renewable energy
  • Climate change
  • Collaboration
  • Global issues
  • Wealth disparity
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