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In most countries, women are given maternity leave from theor jobs after birth. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays Mothers are granted a
period
 from their
work stations
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 after delivery and
this
 occurs almost in every nation.
This
 essay will discuss that
although
 the
period
 creates good bonding
of
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mother
 and baby, there is a lot of
workloads
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 left behind at her job. on the one hand, giving women maternity leave after birth allows them to get enough bonding between the
mother
 and the
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newborn
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new born
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newborn
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.
that is
 to say, when ladies deliver babies, they tend to connect immediately through
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breastfeeding
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breast feeding
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breastfeeding
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 and holding the child during the
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intro
intra natal
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period
 but much more
time
 is needed to bond as the baby needs the
mother
 all the
time
.
Therefore
, the
time
 given to them from the workplace enables both of them to adapt to each other faster and more connection sets in.
For example
, Mothers get more connections with their children after birth through feeding, spending
time
 with them and immunization and all
this
 can be achieved during the leave provided
from
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 the job area,
thus
 it is more advantageous.
on the other hand
, a lot of
work
 is left undone at the workplace which leaves the bosses unsatisfied.
In other words
, if ladies are provided offs after welcoming their babies, there is a gap
of
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 someone who is supposed to keep doing their
work
 as their away.
This
 does not only affect the bosses but
also
the
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 fellow workers as it leaves them with
much
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 things to be done.
For instance
, a woman who gets a post-natal
period
 of more than four months due to the c-section ends up disorganising the all system because the bosses don't know whom to replace until the
mother
 comes back,
instead
 the employer fixed the employee with more
work
. In conclusion, even though there is much pressure at the job place due to a missing person, women deserve
the
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maternity
time
 with their
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newborn
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new born
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 as it helps them connect
hence
 the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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