You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Saman, How are you doing? I hope everything goes well after leaving school. I received your letter

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Friday in which you request advise you on taking a decision either to enter college for higher education or to find a job.

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, I believe that you may have employment rather than having

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boring education according to my point of view because I entered high school for

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qualifications.

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it was boring for me after a couple of months. You can have a profession in the construction field as I am engaged. And

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I remember that your ambition was to be a successful entrepreneur in

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a profitable field. So I recommend finding a relevant operation and gathering experience. It will be more valuable than collecting qualifications on a theoretical basis.

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, I am happy to say that I could find you a suitable profession perhaps.

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, If you want to take

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knowledge about the field you could attend a part-time technical course.

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advice is according to my point of view and you are the person who selects the path. I am willing to meet you on my

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Monday. Best Regards Suranga

Submitted by jds.sampath on Thu Dec 01 2022

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Real-world experience
Practical experience
Financial independence
On-the-job training
Student loan debt
Personal growth
Professional networking
Career development
Skilled workers
Job market
Career goals
Immediate income
Professional relationships
Market demand
Defining interests
Educational investments

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