Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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belive

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universities should encourage countryside

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student

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because they lack

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financial

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and face many difficulties.

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developed areas

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the scarcity of job lead to parents’ financial instability and

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their children. Money is the most

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seriouse

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problem that

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student suffer

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their higher education

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in

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university.

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, government authorities should provide more social

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to help them so juveniles could enter

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education

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effortlessly.

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those who aspire to learn at the

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universities

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university

.

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of many universities which should discount

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tuition

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tuition

fees so everybody can afford it thoroughly.

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rural space should not obtain public

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because it is

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advantage

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students. Admittedly, the universities in urbanised areas offer an excellent optional programme but it is true that

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every body

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can not

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limitations

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school

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or high potential pupils may

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drasticly

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pressure the rural’s children, so it would be better if they choose to study in

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rural’s institute with

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similar level child and

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with low education charges. To conclude, I tend to agree with the former argument owning to opportunity discontribute. Many great children deserve a lot of

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because someday they might return a benefit to our society.

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,not only juveniles from the

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but all

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student

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be

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accept

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state

support

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for

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enhance

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the country

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country

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development.