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Government around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?

#government #world #billions #support #space #programs #money #research #improvements #health
Nowadays a huge amount of money is spent
for
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space
programs
 by authorities around the world.
Nevertheless
, some people think that research
of
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 human
health
 would benefit society much more. In my opinion,
safety
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 of our community in terms of
health
 should be supported more, rather than
space
programs
. In
this
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 I will consider and express my own ideas about
this
 situation. Observing the main source of expenses now,
space
programs
 may give some advantages to our society in the future. The richest and smartest people like Elon Musk and Jeph Bezos, say that investigation of
the
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space
 could improve our
life
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 in terms of high technologies.
For instance
, today wi-fi is available in every spot
of
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 the Earth.
However
, medicine will benefit us much more profoundly, if we are upgrading it. I think that a high level of
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medicine
medecine
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medicine
 would help every person in
this
 world to be happier than they are. High rate of deaths from simple injuries In those regions which are as poor as Africa, Pakistan, and Liberia is
the
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 situation which could be fixed.
For example
, If you give a high level of medicine to
the
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such
 countries, they might change our world greatly.
Furthermore
, it will derive a lot of good specialists to improve every aspect of our lives.
Therefore
, even
space
programs
 will benefit from
this
 decision in the future. To conclude,
although
space
programs
 are helping us to experience a better life, human
health
 must be the
first
 priority goal.
Moreover
, with good
health
 people will be capable to save much more lives which is the most righteous choice.
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